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Huzzah...the first page.
...Needed an excuse to draw Jazz. :XD:

Frankly, I don't know anything about paneling comics, so forgive me if these first few pages are incredibly static...
I'm hoping to learn from trial and error.

Couldn't think of a good name for the "dojo"...So I just used a feminized version of the word Matallikatto (type of Cybertron martial arts), because it sounds...I dunno, more serene? :shrug:

Page 2 coming soon...Critique and feedback is very welcome!


(...Hasbro owns Transformers, I just draw them...)
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poisonouswords Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
So awesome! prowl is my favorite character, besides Blitzwing.
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BlackSkeletonGirl Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
cool!
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. ^_^
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BlackSkeletonGirl Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Np!
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sakuracj-12345 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
cant wait to see the rest of the comic
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far. :) Unfortunately it's sort of on hold at the moment, but I would like to pick the story back up eventually...If you have any suggestions I posted a question about it in this journal: [link]
Feel free to let me know what you think if you want. ^^
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Sounddrive Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa . . .
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Spirited13 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
Nicely layed out! XD
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha...Thanks. I really had no idea how to make a comic when I started this (and still don't really), good to know it comes across well. ^^
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Spirited13 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
You have done a fantastic job so far :D
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Plummeter Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Student Filmographer
Can I use the comic frames, only the frames, for the comic I'm working on? It's about my oc, Mercadez Peace, the Golden Fury.
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Student General Artist
Sure. This layout is old anyway (I'm planning on re-drawing the whole thing). Just give some credit to me or link to my page if you post it please. Thanks for asking first. :)
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Plummeter Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Student Filmographer
Thank you. You just saved me the trouble of sizing Mercadez just right for estimated frames!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem. Good luck with your comic. :thumbsup:
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Plummeter Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Student Filmographer
Thank you! I can't post now 'cause I don't have E-mail downloaded or a scanner for my laptop!
Oh, she's a gold-colored Eastern Dragon TF.


TFA COMIC!!
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REDDISH-MUSE Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow...the last panel is intense.
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Mellow-Striker911 Featured By Owner May 8, 2010
:o oh.my.god.so.cool... *love glomp/deathhug the Idea* :heart:
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner May 8, 2010  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! I hopefully will get around to continuing this comic soon. ^^;
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Setinal-Pax Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
why is jazz in his earth mode?
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Supermoi Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great start...
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Sunchild-sama Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
"Matallikatto" and "more serene" LOL. That's cute. But still, good way to go.

First off, the first panel while looking good when it's minimized, looks a little slapped together when you zoom in. Those temple pillars look like they were thrown in last minute. Other than that, the smoke and shadowed temple in the background are great.

No need for an excuse to draw Jazz, there’s need for the image of one of the successful Cyber-Ninja. Just show how incredible they could become. Where all the training could lead these cadets.

Bonus on the shadowed figure, leave some things to mystery.

I think the best part is the last panel. There are consequences to reaching high. It’s not something that will easily be gained! They will shed energon and metal, and some wouldn’t make it at all! No need to sugar-coat it.

Coloring it still great. I even like that you used green for the panels. Something a little more subtle about the color.
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Sagitari-Seiza-1213 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! Great drawing style! Jazz looks cool with his nunchucks in this panel.
Hope you'll update soon! ^_0
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Student General Artist
Thanks very much!
Now that I look at it Jazz seems kinda out of place here, but I just couldn't resist. :D Glad you like it!
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XxNiGhTsToRmXx Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow you got this page up pretty fast (in my opinion). It looks great and the settings and backgrounds are fantastic. b^^d

Can't wait to see why the autobot symbol has a crack...Oo
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greenleafcm Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Student General Artist
Haha...Thanks. Glad you liked the backgrounds, I was afraid they weren't detailed enough. But I am trying to get these posted in a timely manner (glad you noticed that too). :D

Yeah, that last panel is kinda odd. ^^;
The broken symbol doesn't really have a special significance, it's just there to ambiguously show how they get the crap beat out of them during training. I imagined lots of bots might have quit...but I didn't really know how to effectively convey that in 1/2 panels, so I just went with what I thought would be visually striking. Good to know it gets your attention!
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XxNiGhTsToRmXx Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh those backgrounds were pretty detailed in my opinion. So kudos to you for detailed backgrounds and getting it up pretty fast. b^w^d

oh. That makes much more sense than what I thought. >w<
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StickMasterNinja1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Cool, i likes!
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T-M-N-T Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so coool!! Can't wait for the second page!! X3

WOOT! Go Jazz! :XD:
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sphinxaketra Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Tis excellent :D *cannot wait for more*
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NeoNNerd08 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
This is great! Keep it up! :clap:
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NaxnaVIII Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Haha, Robot Ninjas. That sounds funny when you say it out loud.

I don't like Jazz very much. :/
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